I really want to enjoy this game but the grinding for money is honestly just atrocious, it just takes way too long. I honestly finished most of the content but the remaining content I have to literally just wait for. I mean I need 5000 more gold in the treasury and get 300 in a day, that's way too long. and that's not even mentioning the fact that you only get 20 personal gold per week which is completely asinine and damaging to your system.
On a separate note I hope further into this game we find a way to sort of reverse roles on the queen and Sara, hell Beatrice too. That would be soooooo satisfying.
This comment is regarding the current version 0.0.3.
First and foremost the concept is intriguing. Current execution does not do justice to the concept though.
Every day 300 gold is given for upgrades. This really doesn't work short or long term in the game. This is mainly because the upgrades do not matter. The most any of them do is unlock additional scenes. Normally only 1 scene is behind each upgrade. Larger cost upgrades don't feel worth it because of this. changes that effect the "world" such as changing you income either positively or negatively could put a greater depth to this system. Also factoring in royalties and commoners happiness/needs would also add significantly more depth to this part of the gameplay.
The other issue is the lack of content with characters. Right now about 40 days in game are needed to max out the current building needed to get all scenes. Unfortunantly there are only about 30 days holding any content at most currently. After the initial 15 days periods where you just skip certain sections occur because nothing can fill in that point. You have some repeatable scenes but they only occur in the bar in the evening or at the home at night. More being added could help patch this issue as could adding in new repeatable events with random rewards which could be used in some situations.
On the technical side your X button for the inventory menu was difficult to see at times.
All of this said I am looking forward to how you further develop this game.
I installed KDE Neon on the virtual machine. I have everything working correctly.
Open the screenshot in the new tab to see the full size.
In your case, it will be difficult for me to identify the root cause of the problem, as the OS does not give any response. I can only assume you’re launching the wrong shortcut (InAnotherWorld.sh is right) or your OS has some restrictions on running . sh files.
Thanks so much, really love the game so far. Not sure if it's a bug, but i'm stuck where you let Ann out. I think I have to speak to July, but she's not at the prison (tried all times, multiple days), or at any other location. I've progressed every other mission as far as I can and can't see any way forward in the game. Thanks!
I'm very early on into your game (day 3). And I understand this is an extremely early version of the game. But I simply wanted to give my two cents of what I think so far.
I love the music, it's peaceful and not obnoxious. The characters that I've met thus far seem decent enough. Even Sarah and the creature at the church (her name escapes me).
I do not know how much actual content is in this current version 0.03. But I hope it doesn't end too quickly, as I am enjoying the experience thus far.
Keep up the good work. I will continue following this game. And look forward to seeing what future updates have in store.
i looooooooooooooooooved the gameeeeeeeee!!!! keep up the good work my friend. i found an error on eva, theres nothing more to talk to her, and the game says i have to talk to her. Although i loved it and im going for the 0.0.3 version now, hope u get some time to do android on this, love u!
I was really excited by the new update, but unfortunately it seems I can't load any of my previous saves. Ren'Py gives me an error every time. Rollback does nothing, and "ignore" just sends me to the very beginning of the game. I don't wanna have to start over.
If you wanna see the error log I can pastebin it for you, I'd be happy to help however I can. It also errors when trying to do any of the "Extras."
Yeah, I wrote about this in the change log. Unfortunately the old saves won’t work, because I had to completely remake the game. I'm sorry for that. But the good news is that all the old events have somehow been redesigned. Affection system was reworked, so there is now less grind in the game. When the time comes to release version 0.0.4 saves from 0.0.3 will work properly.
Well I only played most of the beginning, (really couldnt get into it with its early development) but feel it as some problems.
-Feel restricted in our room (is that all our house is, 1 room). -There is nothing to explain how we were summoned, was it a god ? a wizard ? has to be some reason someone would bother to summon us ? We dont just summon on our own? And to be treasurer at that, In a prebuilt life? Feels like a pointless summon to me, unless theres some other motive behind it. The person or thing behind your summoning doesnt seem to be present in the story at all. Is this for a later reveal ? -MC doesnt really seem to reflect much after being summoned, he just goes with the flow, I dont feel like he tries to learn where he is, or why, or how this happened. You'd think he would try to learn alot more to understand where he is ?. He almost got executed on the very first day. That would be scary shit. You cant just really brush that aside. I guess my suggestion would be more internal dialog running through his thoughts and what hes going to do. -Whats the point of having a girl who rejected us at a non-important party on earth (before the summoning), look alike to the princess who just wanted to have us executed simply for just annoying her (stopped by the Queen). Clearly not the same person at least. Then all of a sudden we're expected to get +5 rep with her to advance her story, after she told us that she cant touch us because of the queen, but left a threat "that can change". (hinting her mother could have "an accident" and she becomes the new Queen. Then yes, our heads on the block) How the hell am I suppose to have motivation to spend time with her lol. In this type of scenario, the story/development should be forcing her to come to us. Then build relations points there. - Animal....... cute as fuck. Really interested in having characters where theres a communication barrier to work through. So I guess it was nice to see :) I see potential here :).
Anyway, dont want to tattle on to long and be too negative, but I understand its still early development and it really needs time to be polished, so wish you good luck with it. :)
Wow, I’m impressed with your comment :) Yeah, there’s a lot of problems in that version. History, game mechanics, locations, sprites (some too bright), grammar and my spelling, even the code are far from ideal. So I had to start a new version from the beginning. I hope in 0.0.3 old problems will be solved (At least a little).
Btw I 'll share the game public in a week :)
Thank you for your extended comment and thank you for playing my game
The ui, Animations and Characters are all awesome and everything feels well done, only thing that kinda breaks it for me is the broken and incoherent english, kinda stops me from feeling much for the sory or characters, like their personalities though :P
Can’t wait to see more though!
I wonder the reason of adding in options the Russian language, if player can’t select it now. I do love the sleep scene, I wish more).
There some mistakes in text.
In introduction: “Most of the money is spen(D)ing on ma(I)ntaining of…”. In church: “The(Y) are a little bit smarter…”.
In prison there was a mistake “NameError: name ‘vpunchR’ is not defined”. I can’t increase affection points of Gloria. It’ll be nice if in gallery the name “Your pet” changes on player’s name.
In general, I liked the game. Nice story, arts and animation. I was able to go through the events of Eve until the moment of her disappearance, and I saw a scene with a name in prison. I did not find any more events. I wonder where July is. For the first version of the game, this is quite good. But for future versions, you need to do more events per day, since I went through to day 36 just for the sake of raising Eve’s affection points. I can see one quest on the quest list to look for a blanket, but I haven’t found a way to complete it. I also have a wish for the save menu. Make the Save or Load button highlighted, otherwise it’s not clear what the player is doing right now. Or you need to make some kind of heading “Save game” or “Load game”.
Hi! Thank you very much for your feedback. Actually Russian translation is not available simply because I have not translated it yet :) I'll add Russian translation in a few updates.
For this version it will be hard to change “Your pet” on player’s name because it's picture. But definitely the status and quests screens will be redone.
Don't worry about July. I will add events with her next update :)
Thanks for the remark about the save and load screens. I will definitely make it more convenient.
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I really want to enjoy this game but the grinding for money is honestly just atrocious, it just takes way too long. I honestly finished most of the content but the remaining content I have to literally just wait for. I mean I need 5000 more gold in the treasury and get 300 in a day, that's way too long. and that's not even mentioning the fact that you only get 20 personal gold per week which is completely asinine and damaging to your system.
On a separate note I hope further into this game we find a way to sort of reverse roles on the queen and Sara, hell Beatrice too. That would be soooooo satisfying.
where and what day can i find july in the morning part
Just walk around the house and you’ll find her.
Day is not matter.
are we going to have to wait almost a year for 0.0.5? or are we going to see more frenquent updates ?
I hope the next version will be released a little faster.
Update?
This comment is regarding the current version 0.0.3.
First and foremost the concept is intriguing. Current execution does not do justice to the concept though.
Every day 300 gold is given for upgrades. This really doesn't work short or long term in the game. This is mainly because the upgrades do not matter. The most any of them do is unlock additional scenes. Normally only 1 scene is behind each upgrade. Larger cost upgrades don't feel worth it because of this. changes that effect the "world" such as changing you income either positively or negatively could put a greater depth to this system. Also factoring in royalties and commoners happiness/needs would also add significantly more depth to this part of the gameplay.
The other issue is the lack of content with characters. Right now about 40 days in game are needed to max out the current building needed to get all scenes. Unfortunantly there are only about 30 days holding any content at most currently. After the initial 15 days periods where you just skip certain sections occur because nothing can fill in that point. You have some repeatable scenes but they only occur in the bar in the evening or at the home at night. More being added could help patch this issue as could adding in new repeatable events with random rewards which could be used in some situations.
On the technical side your X button for the inventory menu was difficult to see at times.
All of this said I am looking forward to how you further develop this game.
will there be a new update?
In the near future. You can join the discord channel to see the updates.
Is this abandoned?
Hello. No it's not abandoned.
Is this playable on Android via Joi play
No :(
Can you change the colour of the white writing to darker personally I find it difficult to read when it's on a light background.
Hy if you you want to play it on Android install jioplay and install zarchiver from it extract it and open jioplay
Click on add botton
Go where u extracted it and open,
InAnotherWorld.py
And download this before opening it
Is there a apk version
I haven't started developing an Android version of the game yet
when will 0.0.4 come out?
I can’t give you the exact date, but the game is about 90-95%, so it should be soon.
I kinda need some help. I cant run the game on Linux (I use KDE Neon).
Please attach a screenshot of error.
the probleme is that it simply wont run, no error message, it just doesnt want to start
I installed KDE Neon on the virtual machine. I have everything working correctly.
Open the screenshot in the new tab to see the full size.
In your case, it will be difficult for me to identify the root cause of the problem, as the OS does not give any response. I can only assume you’re launching the wrong shortcut (InAnotherWorld.sh is right) or your OS has some restrictions on running . sh files.
thanks
Okay i dont know what the error was but after an update i was able to run the game.
Where can i find July?(I'm sorry if this stupid question waste your time.)
At home :)
Wait，so late?
No-no, it is not important. I mean you can find her every day at this place in the evening.
Oh,sorry about that,and thank you for your answer.
Will there be a version for android
It will. But I can’t say anything about the timeline right now.
Ok
Thanks so much, really love the game so far. Not sure if it's a bug, but i'm stuck where you let Ann out. I think I have to speak to July, but she's not at the prison (tried all times, multiple days), or at any other location. I've progressed every other mission as far as I can and can't see any way forward in the game. Thanks!
Hi, thank you for feedback :)
You probably can find July at home in the evening and ask her to bring Ann.
Perfect, thank you! Finished the game, really love it, can't wait for the full version!
Hi how do I get to Sara's room
Just check the map :)
If you've reached affection with Sara to 8, her room should be shown on the map.
Ahaha i didn't expect to be able to go their from the map I went to the castel by logic
Did u modelise characters and background by yourself ?
I'm using Koikatsu...
So, characters - yes
backgrounds - ported by different modders, I can change some parts for game needs
What is the engine?
It's just a renpy novel. I am using Koikatsu for sprites.
OK, thanks. I wanted to know that, so I can emulate on Android.
I liked the game, cant wait for the next update
Is there anyway of play in Android? Some kind of convert or something like that
Not officially
Sometime in the future.
I'm liking the game so far. There is an "extras" option on the main menu that crashes the game when you try to go through its empty pages.
Yeah, for now "extras" doesn't work. I'll make it in the next version.
Just wanted to make sure you knew about the crashing since I didn't see it going through the other comments. Keep up the good work.
How do I get to the bath?
Hi. it's here.
I'm very early on into your game (day 3).
And I understand this is an extremely early version of the game.
But I simply wanted to give my two cents of what I think so far.
I love the music, it's peaceful and not obnoxious.
The characters that I've met thus far seem decent enough.
Even Sarah and the creature at the church (her name escapes me).
I do not know how much actual content is in this current version 0.03.
But I hope it doesn't end too quickly, as I am enjoying the experience thus far.
Keep up the good work.
I will continue following this game.
And look forward to seeing what future updates have in store.
Thank you for your kind words.
In the current version of the game about 2-3 hours of gameplay.
i looooooooooooooooooved the gameeeeeeeee!!!! keep up the good work my friend. i found an error on eva, theres nothing more to talk to her, and the game says i have to talk to her. Although i loved it and im going for the 0.0.3 version now, hope u get some time to do android on this, love u!
Hello, thank you for playing :)
Could you describe the error a little bit more?
At what point does it occur?
I was really excited by the new update, but unfortunately it seems I can't load any of my previous saves. Ren'Py gives me an error every time. Rollback does nothing, and "ignore" just sends me to the very beginning of the game. I don't wanna have to start over.
If you wanna see the error log I can pastebin it for you, I'd be happy to help however I can. It also errors when trying to do any of the "Extras."
Yeah, I wrote about this in the change log. Unfortunately the old saves won’t work, because I had to completely remake the game. I'm sorry for that. But the good news is that all the old events have somehow been redesigned. Affection system was reworked, so there is now less grind in the game. When the time comes to release version 0.0.4 saves from 0.0.3 will work properly.
Well I only played most of the beginning, (really couldnt get into it with its early development) but feel it as some problems.
-Feel restricted in our room (is that all our house is, 1 room).
-There is nothing to explain how we were summoned, was it a god ? a wizard ? has to be some reason someone would bother to summon us ? We dont just summon on our own? And to be treasurer at that, In a prebuilt life? Feels like a pointless summon to me, unless theres some other motive behind it. The person or thing behind your summoning doesnt seem to be present in the story at all. Is this for a later reveal ?
-MC doesnt really seem to reflect much after being summoned, he just goes with the flow, I dont feel like he tries to learn where he is, or why, or how this happened. You'd think he would try to learn alot more to understand where he is ?. He almost got executed on the very first day. That would be scary shit. You cant just really brush that aside. I guess my suggestion would be more internal dialog running through his thoughts and what hes going to do.
-Whats the point of having a girl who rejected us at a non-important party on earth (before the summoning), look alike to the princess who just wanted to have us executed simply for just annoying her (stopped by the Queen). Clearly not the same person at least. Then all of a sudden we're expected to get +5 rep with her to advance her story, after she told us that she cant touch us because of the queen, but left a threat "that can change". (hinting her mother could have "an accident" and she becomes the new Queen. Then yes, our heads on the block) How the hell am I suppose to have motivation to spend time with her lol. In this type of scenario, the story/development should be forcing her to come to us. Then build relations points there.
- Animal....... cute as fuck. Really interested in having characters where theres a communication barrier to work through. So I guess it was nice to see :) I see potential here :).
Anyway, dont want to tattle on to long and be too negative, but I understand its still early development and it really needs time to be polished, so wish you good luck with it. :)
Wow, I’m impressed with your comment :)
Yeah, there’s a lot of problems in that version.
History, game mechanics, locations, sprites (some too bright), grammar and my spelling, even the code are far from ideal. So I had to start a new version from the beginning. I hope in 0.0.3 old problems will be solved (At least a little).
Btw I 'll share the game public in a week :)
Thank you for your extended comment and thank you for playing my game
Will there be a android version in the future?
Hi, I really want to make the android version, but I don’t have time for this for the foreseeable future.
tried, couldnt play it, grammar is off and it makes it hard to play. please update this before the new version as the game looks interesting.
Thanks for your feedback :)
Eu não consegui da comigo a animal alguém pode me ajudar por favor
Hi, do you have a date for when the next update will come out?
Hello, I hope at the beginning of October.
But it depends on my free time anyway.
The ui, Animations and Characters are all awesome and everything feels well done, only thing that kinda breaks it for me is the broken and incoherent english, kinda stops me from feeling much for the sory or characters, like their personalities though :P Can’t wait to see more though!
Thank you for feedback. Yeah, my English is not as good as I would like. Maybe I should use third-party help before the 0.0.3 release.
Next version is getting closer every day. Game UI will be much better, more story... and a few new characters, but it's a secret :)
If you ever need someone to proofread or correct the mistakes let me know. I'm a self proclaimed grammar policeman.
Thank you :)
I can't install it. It gives me an error, "can't read property of build 'undefined'." The game doesn't even show up in the install dropdown menu.
I have just discovered butler thanks to you :)
The game is now available for download from itchio app:)
Great!
great game and lots of potential, Im thinking of doing a Swedish translation perhaps if you're interested. Do you have discord or a discord server?
Thank you for feedback. Actually I don't have Discord server yet. I will do it later.
aí vc pode me ajudar vc pode me alguma dica sobre o animal como da comida a ela
Bro the game is good so far and has a lot of potential
Keep up the great work I know ur gonna gofar
Thank you for feedback. I'll try my best :)
animations for everything r not needed like dialogue, especially some that dont have a seemless loop, not bad so far tho
Thanks for feedback.
Will u make an android version in the future?
Definitely will!
But I want to be sure that game is interesting for people. That's why I'm waiting for your feedback :)
I wonder the reason of adding in options the Russian language, if player can’t select it now. I do love the sleep scene, I wish more).
There some mistakes in text. In introduction: “Most of the money is spen(D)ing on ma(I)ntaining of…”. In church: “The(Y) are a little bit smarter…”. In prison there was a mistake “NameError: name ‘vpunchR’ is not defined”. I can’t increase affection points of Gloria. It’ll be nice if in gallery the name “Your pet” changes on player’s name.
In general, I liked the game. Nice story, arts and animation. I was able to go through the events of Eve until the moment of her disappearance, and I saw a scene with a name in prison. I did not find any more events. I wonder where July is. For the first version of the game, this is quite good. But for future versions, you need to do more events per day, since I went through to day 36 just for the sake of raising Eve’s affection points. I can see one quest on the quest list to look for a blanket, but I haven’t found a way to complete it. I also have a wish for the save menu. Make the Save or Load button highlighted, otherwise it’s not clear what the player is doing right now. Or you need to make some kind of heading “Save game” or “Load game”.
Hi! Thank you very much for your feedback. Actually Russian translation is not available simply because I have not translated it yet :) I'll add Russian translation in a few updates.
For this version it will be hard to change “Your pet” on player’s name because it's picture. But definitely the status and quests screens will be redone.
Don't worry about July. I will add events with her next update :)
Thanks for the remark about the save and load screens. I will definitely make it more convenient.
Have a nice day!
Hello everyone. Please let your feedback. No matter good or bad. It will help me to create something special.